Thursday 28 September 2017

Feedback from Luke for Pitch #2

Today we presented our treatment to Luke. He liked the tunnel idea with strip lights and the idea of being claustrophobic within that area. We presented the idea of silhouettes and how out it would be a party vibe, but he got confused by this. The idea he didn't understand was how we were going to link the silhouettes to the contrast of the light ending scene.

He suggested that we need to make more connections within the narrative of how the darkness of the video turns into the brightness and how she has found someone she wants to connect with.

So therefore we need to brainstorm about how we are going to link the narrative of a love story in essence.

1 comment:

  1. Kate some excellent blogging in what has been a busy week for you. Thank you for feeding back on BUG56 to the class this is much appreciated and you have blogged what you learned well. The treatment you have presented to Luke was logical and clear in its ideas - now just to translate them into a timeline and storyboard - plenty of planning ahead. Be clear and creative about the different elements of your music video.

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