Friday 24 November 2017

First set of feedback

We showed a few people out rough cut and most of them liked it. Maya and Karina said that it was cool. Mike suggested that we should put the red scenes further into the video and bring it in to the chorus, instead of the first verse. Lily suggested to remove a shot of Honor lip syncing while smiling and that is quite shaky.

I sent the video to my Dad and he suggested that the shot of the eye blinking isn't very good because he has worked in the film industry for a while and they suggest that its a bad shot. He also said that we shouldn't focus so much on her hands. So in the glitches I feel we may have to change it from her touching her waist to her being more performance like.

Jason (our media teacher) was expecting the girl to be singing about a boy to 'ignite her', so he was shocked when he realised it was a girl at the end. He like the surprise tho, it is very unconventional.

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